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In our world there are a lot of means of transport.One of them is a car.

In this essay I will tell you about  the advantages and disadvantages  of traveling by car.

The most common argument for this such of travelling is speed, which depends on the type of your (или a car) car. I think that it is a very big advantage. When you travel by car you can look through the window. It's a very pleasant process if you like it.
 In favour of  disadvantages I can say that some people may have a car-sick. Travelling by car is not really my kind of thing,because I have  a car-sick, but it depends on comfort  of the car. It sounds stupid but it is true. I can't put up with(вытерпеть) father's car, when we travel somewhere. I feel headache and sickness. But in the car of my relatives I feel much better than in my father's car.
Evidently (явно) that this mean of transport  is not for all people, but if you like to travel by car you'll have a good impressions from your trip.

in our world

лучше a lot of kinds of transport

one of them is car.

of travelling

which depends

that it is

process

people

travelling by car

it depends

beauty of the car

travelling or to travel

you have good impressions

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