Очень безотлагательно!!! Проверьте пожалуйста письмо по британскому Dear Susan, Thank you

Очень срочно!!! Проверьте пожалуйста письмо по британскому
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your letter. It was great to hear from you! You asked me to tell you about how I help my parents. Well, I can say that of course, I always try to help, like my friends, my parents.
In the summer, for example, I help my mother in the garden weeding, watering, harvest. Dad help in the apiary, to take care of bees, honey swing and many more. In our family my brother and I have the duties of cleaning the house.
Well, I must finish now. Its already 11 oclock.
With best regards,
Vlad
Тема: ..My mother complains that I am lazy and dont help her much. Do you or your friends often help your parents? How? What duties does every member of you family have in the house? ...
(... Мать сетует, что я ленивый и малюсенько ей помогаю. Ты либо твои друзья нередко подсобляете вашим родителям? Каким образом? Какие повинности есть у каждого члена вашей семьи в доме? ...)