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Dear "name",

I just heard that you have received a new job! I couldnt be happier for you! Congratulations!

Although I still havent been able to find a job, your success has inspired me to try harder. I know it is not easy to get a good job for a fresh graduate, I am proud of you really! I know how self-motivated you are. I am quite sure that your good knowledge and skills, and what is most importantly love to your profession, will make you a great architect. I have hardly any work experience but I am not going to give up and still believe that I will get a good job as well! I cant thank you enough for your kind words and support!

By the way, the whole family is terribly missing you. We all wait when you will find time to visit us and bring Holly with you, we didnt see her since her Birthday party. You know that my parents consider you as their second son and how they love Holy! Please send hellos from all of us to your wife!

With best regards,

name.