Очень прошу, помогите с грамматикой, проверьте текст. Безотлагательно. Мне сдавать днем.

Очень прошу, помогите с грамматикой, проверьте текст. СРОЧНО. Мне сдавать днем. Computers in Our Life. I would like to talk about what is the role of computers in our lives. These machines appeared quite a long time ago, in the middle of the last century. Initially, computers were huge, enormous machines, but over time, their size decreased and the quality has improved. People have invented for themselves indispensable helpers in the work, socializing with friends and in their own entertainment. Computers help to make a persons shopping list, remind someone of important appointments and anniversaries and answer the telephone. We cant imagine our life without computers. Many people get used to such effect and can no longer get rid of it. So there is a dependence on computers and computer games. Of course, this is bad, because this effect destroys the man, his health and life. In the end, he can go crazy as computer addiction similar to drug addiction, from which it is very difficult to recover. Thus, I believe that people should be able to control their actions and not let the quot;iron robotsquot; to subordinate themselves and thereby to ruin their future. I believe that we should not zloupotrebliati the benefits that people give computers, otherwise it will be too much, and modern technology will absorb people.